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GlobalWatchWatch: American Family
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Saturday, August 7, 2010. This section, while not horribly written, disturbs me. The person who typed in Global Watch. Matches two of the characters, Max and Rachel, in a romance. It's a subplot of the story how they realize their true feelings for each other. That's all well and sickly sweet and ho-hum predictable, but this section has the domestic abuse hotline counselor in me screaming out. I hope in Book 2 of the exciting series Global Watch. Posted by Global Watcher. August 7, 2010 at 8:46 PM. The C...
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GlobalWatchWatch: February 2010
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Friday, February 26, 2010. Movie Time, Again! Welcome to another installment of GlobalWatchWatch Theater, featuring Laura and Oleg. It's not my best work, but consider the source material I had to work with. Posted by Global Watcher. Tuesday, February 23, 2010. Because I am lazy. The person who typed in Global Watch. Uses the verb "unfold" 13 times in the course of the story. Posted by Global Watcher. Sunday, February 21, 2010. I also hate Kyp. Here's another one of Global Watch. Could have avoided the c...
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GlobalWatchWatch: Still not there.
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Sunday, April 11, 2010. Seeing as how the person who typed in Global Watch hasn't taken me up on my offer. To edit the final, latest, Re-Edited One Year Anniversary Edition of Global Watch. I'm using the one at the Smashwords webpage. And, quelle surprise! It still has errors in it. Then/than" confusion still reigns (or, as the person who typed in Global Watch. Might write, "reins". Oblivious pitfall" continues to be awesome. To repeat: This is what the person who typed in Global Watch. RED PEN, INC.
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GlobalWatchWatch: Verbs
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Sunday, August 1, 2010. Today, I'd like to talk about verbs. The person who typed in Global Watch. Has a hard time using the right tense, and the right verb. For instance, read this action-packed, fast paced section. I'm confused by how the person who typed in Global Watch. Describes Kyp's fighting style. First, he "launches" his attacker across the room, and then stands up. Then, after he says, "Are you so sure about that? He is sitting again. The person who typed in Global Watch. Wants us to believe th...
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GlobalWatchWatch: S*** My Dad Says
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Sunday, August 1, 2010. S* * My Dad Says. I try to be as succinct as possible on this blog. As for my attitude toward Global Watch, I don't think I can top the conciseness of the Shit My Dad Says Dad. YOU, a published writer? Internet don't count. Any asshole can throw shit up on there.". Thank you, Shit My Dad Says Dad. Your attitude toward self-publishing is refreshingly traditionalist. I hope you're not also talking about blogs. Posted by Global Watcher. Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom). RED PEN, INC.
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GlobalWatchWatch: An Open Letter to the Person Who Typed in Global Watch
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Wednesday, August 25, 2010. An Open Letter to the Person Who Typed in Global Watch. Thou that seest Universal. Nature moved by Universal Mind;. Thou majestic in thy sadness. At the doubtful doom of human kind;. Light among the vanished ages;. Star that gildest yet this phantom shore;. Golden branch amid the shadows,. Kings and realms that pass to rise no more;. Now thy Forum roars no longer,. Fallen every purple Caesar's dome -. Tho' thine ocean-roll of rhythm. Sound for ever of Imperial Rome -. For a ye...
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GlobalWatchWatch: July 2010
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Saturday, July 24, 2010. A good measure of a writer is how well he describes something. Without the ability to paint a picture for the reader, a writer is just doing stenography. The person who typed in Global Watch. Is not a writer. That's why I've steadfastly refused to call him anything but "the person who typed in Global Watch. Still, his attempts at writing, especially description, continue to appall me with their laziness and ineptitude. Like this paragraph. Let's work through this together. That's...
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GlobalWatchWatch: March 2010
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Sunday, March 28, 2010. Here's another great scene that makes me laugh, then retch. I guess Global Watch is like the religious Youth Group I got kicked out of when I was younger: horny people talking about God and making out. That Kyp and Laura are 34-year old adults really adds a big spoonful of "eew" to this decadent sundae. Posted by Global Watcher. Thursday, March 25, 2010. Response, Part 2. In the statement accompanying the release of the Re-edited One Year Anniversary Edition of Global Watch. You s...
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The Copy Edits of J. Alfred Proofreader: Headline Blunder First of Two Mistakes In Telegraph Story
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Wednesday, January 20, 2010. Headline Blunder First of Two Mistakes In Telegraph Story. On the Web site of The Daily Telegraph. Spanish politician Gaspar Llamazares decried the "low level" of intelligence the FBI demonstrated by using his hair and facial features in a digital simulation of what Osama bin Laden might look like sans his usual long beard and turban get-up. (They basically just made Llamazares look older, called him bin Laden. Offers readers a very thorough online Style Book. A Walk in the W...
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GlobalWatchWatch: August 2010
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Wednesday, August 25, 2010. An Open Letter to the Person Who Typed in Global Watch. Thou that seest Universal. Nature moved by Universal Mind;. Thou majestic in thy sadness. At the doubtful doom of human kind;. Light among the vanished ages;. Star that gildest yet this phantom shore;. Golden branch amid the shadows,. Kings and realms that pass to rise no more;. Now thy Forum roars no longer,. Fallen every purple Caesar's dome -. Tho' thine ocean-roll of rhythm. Sound for ever of Imperial Rome -. For a ye...
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